Powerful Verbs - making our sentences exciting!

ords). We started with sentences that were so boring we snored and had to make them exciting by working in our table groups. Everyone in our group had to help!

Red Table:

She got up.

Chloe G yawned and stretched, slowly climbing out of bed.

Green Table:

I went to the shops.

Serena the puppy zoomed to the ice-cream shop early on Monday morning to buy a 5-scoop chocolate ice-cream.

Yellow Table:

He was late.

Ben S woke up late for Kuranui School on Monday morning the 28th of March because his leg was broken and it was squished.

Blue Table:

They went out.

Ben 10 and Batman sprinted to the doctors in Hamilton because they were sick and they and to say "arhhhhh".

Ms Daniels

She has sparkly blonde hair tickling her shoulders and her earrings glisten like the blue sky.

Her nose is like a bike ramp that you can zoom down.

Her smile looks beautiful like an upside down rainbow.

She has a floaty dress that is like a fan.

Mrs Clark

Blonde glistening hair tickles her shoulders.

She has strong rippling muscles.

She has a silver Pandora bracelet that jingles when she moves.

She has blue eyes like the sky.

Mrs Jones

Sparkly blue eyes glisten behind her glasses.

She has brown hair in a bob.

Her sparkly white teeth glisten when she smiles.

She has glasses to help her see.

She wears a shiny necklace.

Mrs Clements

Her high heels clip clop down the hall looking cool.

Her blue and green eyes have long black lashes.

Gold bracelets and necklace sparkle in the sun shine.

She has short blonde hair.

She is tall.

The Mystery of the Kuranui School Pen Thief!!!

Our absentminded teacher, Ms Daniels, is always forgetting what she has done with her pens and highlighters. We discovered that we have a "Pen Thief" at Kuranui School; the thief snuck silently in to our classroom and snatched Ms Daniels's pens right in the middle of our Word Work lesson. Luckily our cameras caught a few images of her stealthily sauntering around our school.

We talked about how we could catch the Pen Thief and thought that filling in a SuspiciousPersons Report might help.
Our writing Walt (we are learning to...) was:

- Use adjectives to describe how someone looks. 

How do you think we did? Please feel free to leave constructive comments.